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Time:05:28 pm
It's me again Margaret.....


Okay people I'm stuck. My brain keeps focusing on this thing thats going to happen in three chapters and not letting me write until I figure it out.

Cain was dating a guy named Peter. On Father's Day two years ago, Cain skipped town without really explaining why. He also took a huge chunk out of their joint checking accounts.

Now - It's close to the anniversary of the day that Cain and Peter met, and Peter thinks he's seen Cain.

Turns out it was Cain, and Peter's friend/lover/boy, Jason, slept with him the day previous.

Jason meets Cain again, confronts him. Cain attacks Jason. Cain dies in the resulting fight. They happen to have met near the river and instead of calling the police or telling anyone, Jason rolls the body into the river.

What would Cain have done or said to make Jason keep quiet.
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danielefton
Subject:Option A
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Time:2006-11-08 10:55 pm (UTC)
It isn't Cain, but (twin) brother Carl. Carl reveals that Cain died of natural causes but left behind a journal that implicates Peter in a murder.

Jason tries to talk Carl out of talking to Peter or the Cops, but Carl won't have it and tries to knock Jason out so he can go on with his business.

Jason fights back, and Carl dies.

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This option is neat, but kinda makes me want to pull in a cop character to sort things out, and I don't really want the story to take that route. I think I can get by without having to have either case solved. Or without getting to technical about it and having both Peter and Jason let off.
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